Tell me what you think!

[MikeB]

This is my first time writing poetry, so I figured I would make it meaningful.

http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=138206

 

[BDMc]

Works For Me

Works For Me

Mike, I like it. It certainly captures the experience I had! All the best, Brian

 

[plexxer]

I agree, I thought it was very good.

 

[Mary]

Good going, Mike!
I didn't get a mechanical so I didn't hear the ticking, but I was very aware of my heart beat.

 

[hensylee]

Mike, there are some who hate their ticking. It would be nice if you posted your poem here in VR??? Then we can refer to it from time to time.

I really liked it. And VRers can really relate - at least those who tick.

 

[MikeB]

Where should I post it at?

 

[Blanche]

Wonderful poem..

Wonderful poem..

I loved your poem. It brought a big smile to my face.

Perhaps you could post it on Small Talk or Post Surgery.

Kind regards, and a big thanks,
Blanche